To which he nonetheless attaches central importance

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Habituellement

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Hello,

I would like to know if the end of the following sentence is correct English:
Not claiming to be an expert in history, Spencer is concerned with a merely theoretical interpretation, to which, as will be shown, he nonetheless attaches central importance.
I am wondering whether it would not be better to write "he attaches central importance, however".
What is your opinion?

Thank you very much for your help.
 
Did you write the quoted sentence? If not, who did?
 
Did you write the quoted sentence? If not, who did?

Yes I did, Rover_KE.
I have the feeling that my sentence is not very elegant, but perhaps I am wrong.
 
Your original sentence is fine.
 
I'd say that not only would it not be better, it would in fact be wrong.
 
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