Be sure that your topic sentence indicates that what your paragraph is about.

diamondcutter said:

that it is a complete though, and that it limits your paragraph.

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diamondcutter said:

Be sure that your topic sentence indicates: that
- what your paragraph is about
- that it is a complete thought
- that it limits your paragraph.

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diamondcutter said:

Begin your paragraph with a topic sentence rather than a title. Be sure that your topic sentence indicates that what your paragraph is about, that it is a complete thought, and that it limits your paragraph.

Source: Paragraph Practice, 5th edition, Kathleen E. Sullivan

The word “that” in bold seems redundant to me. What do you say?

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diamondcutter said:

Yes, that "though" was my typo, which should have been "thought". I've corrected it. Thanks for pointing that out.

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