Anna232
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It is not an answer to a question. Just sharing my opinion about some spiritual matters. Are my corrections right? I thought it would be better if I tried to correct them myself first.
1.I can't agree with the view that death is the end. I believe that after death we can continue our way in a new world or in heaven.
The corrected version: I can't agree with the view that death is the end. I believe that after death we can continue our existance in a new world or in Heaven. I think "heaven" and "hell" is usually capitalized.
2. Even if a person doesn't believe in Hell or Heaven, they could believe in life after death. Maybe our mind or conscioushness could continue its journey after our death.
Even if a person doesn't believe in Hell or Heaven, they could believe in life after death. Maybe our mind or consciousness could continue their journey after death. I removed "our." I am not sure if I should add "the" before "life after death." I used "could" to talk about a suggestion.
3. People who are afraid of death are concentrated on their fright, so they can't enjoy their life, can't feel absolutely happy. They are afraid of many things in life and they could feel anxiety that make their life depressed.
People who are afraid of death are focused on their fear, so they can't enjoy their life, or feel absolutely happy. They are afraid of many things in life and they feel anxious and depressed. (I do know such people.)
1.I can't agree with the view that death is the end. I believe that after death we can continue our way in a new world or in heaven.
The corrected version: I can't agree with the view that death is the end. I believe that after death we can continue our existance in a new world or in Heaven. I think "heaven" and "hell" is usually capitalized.
2. Even if a person doesn't believe in Hell or Heaven, they could believe in life after death. Maybe our mind or conscioushness could continue its journey after our death.
Even if a person doesn't believe in Hell or Heaven, they could believe in life after death. Maybe our mind or consciousness could continue their journey after death. I removed "our." I am not sure if I should add "the" before "life after death." I used "could" to talk about a suggestion.
3. People who are afraid of death are concentrated on their fright, so they can't enjoy their life, can't feel absolutely happy. They are afraid of many things in life and they could feel anxiety that make their life depressed.
People who are afraid of death are focused on their fear, so they can't enjoy their life, or feel absolutely happy. They are afraid of many things in life and they feel anxious and depressed. (I do know such people.)
