large explanation (email)

Hi, I'm trying to explain to a client 3 different solutions of PV system.
Thanks for helping.


If we use 100m2 of area, we can reach up to 50 panels. In this case, the solar output can reach 26 kW during peak hours of the day (about 30 amps/phase). The consumption of the restaurant during the night (between 5 pm and 1 pm) is about 100 kWh. We can supply you with 48 batteries of "type of the battery" (available right now in our stock) unless you prefer to reduce the number of batteries to 24 " here I will write another type of battery" and then it needs 4 to 6 weeks to be delivered to Singapore upon signature. However, note that the number of panels (50 panels) might not be enough to supply power throughout the day and sufficiently recharge the batteries, since the 50 panels provide 3,300kWh of solar energy production per month (110kwh/day).
In another option, we can minimize the storage of the batteries but persist on the number of panels which is 50.
And in the third option, we provide you with 24 panels that cover 50m2 of area, but this number of panels will cover 1/3 of your consumption.

Joj said:

.... during the peak hours of the day ... during the night (between 5 pm and 1 am pm) is about 100 kWh.

Click to expand...

Joj said:

In another option, [ 1] we can minimize the storage of the batteries but persist on stick to the number of panels which is (50).

And in the third option is that we provide you with 24 panels that cover 50m2 of area, but this number of panels will cover 1/3 of your consumption.

Click to expand...

[ 1]: That is unnatural. Do you mean "alternatively"?

Two things. One, what's a large explanation? Two, what does it mean to reach 50 panels?

Putting all that information into paragraphs and trying to link them is getting complicated. Strip it right back. Say, "Here are the three options we can offer you:", then use a numbered list with the simplest possible explanation of the options, like this:

1. [Basic explanation of option 1]
Line break here
2. [Basic explanation of option 2]
Line break here
3. [Basic explanation of option 3]